Mark Michaels
Neutral Mutant
Flame
A spot of Fire and I will burn
Posts: 68
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Mark
Jul 21, 2006 9:02:09 GMT -5
Post by Mark Michaels on Jul 21, 2006 9:02:09 GMT -5
Codename: Flame Real Name:Mark Age:19 Gender: Male Appearance: (Hair, physical build, eyes, etc.) Clothing: (Three sets, can be the same. Everyday clothes, training suit, combat suit) In everyday Clothes you can see him in some jeans and a shirt for fighting some red and like partys something that the girls fall on. Powers: pyrokinetic and he can levitate. Personality: Kind and friendly but with a serious kick-butt side when annoyed History: Only that we know from Mark is that he was talking to Jean and was neutral he is still talking to Jean but he is the boyfriend from Lillian. His parents died a long time ago and now is alone he thinks he is alone and he don't know what to do. It is just if he would like to die or be alone but it will be changed if Jean or Lillian can change his thoughts. Team Affiliates: Neutral
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Mark
Jul 21, 2006 11:56:12 GMT -5
Post by jean on Jul 21, 2006 11:56:12 GMT -5
everything looks good, only thing I can suggest is put a bit more into the history, other then that its fine
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Mark Michaels
Neutral Mutant
Flame
A spot of Fire and I will burn
Posts: 68
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Mark
Jul 21, 2006 12:08:51 GMT -5
Post by Mark Michaels on Jul 21, 2006 12:08:51 GMT -5
better
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Mark
Jul 21, 2006 15:52:12 GMT -5
Post by jean on Jul 21, 2006 15:52:12 GMT -5
yes approved
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